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	<title>Comments on: First person</title>
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		<title>By: Kelley</title>
		<link>http://sterlingediting.com/first-person/comment-page-1/#comment-1080</link>
		<dc:creator>Kelley</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 15 Aug 2011 21:10:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>So glad you found it useful! If there is anything we can clarify in comments here or in a blog article, please let us know and we&#039;ll be happy to provide more info.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>So glad you found it useful! If there is anything we can clarify in comments here or in a blog article, please let us know and we&#8217;ll be happy to provide more info.</p>
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		<title>By: Mary</title>
		<link>http://sterlingediting.com/first-person/comment-page-1/#comment-1079</link>
		<dc:creator>Mary</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 15 Aug 2011 20:48:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I am just at a point of vacillation--wondering if I am on the optimal story-telling track with my POV.  Your example-detailed article truly gives me a means to add reasoned conviction to my, until now, best guess.  Thank you!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I am just at a point of vacillation&#8211;wondering if I am on the optimal story-telling track with my POV.  Your example-detailed article truly gives me a means to add reasoned conviction to my, until now, best guess.  Thank you!</p>
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		<title>By: Nicola</title>
		<link>http://sterlingediting.com/first-person/comment-page-1/#comment-858</link>
		<dc:creator>Nicola</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 20 Apr 2011 17:50:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Sherry, I&#039;m delighted you found it useful!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sherry, I&#8217;m delighted you found it useful!</p>
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		<title>By: sherry</title>
		<link>http://sterlingediting.com/first-person/comment-page-1/#comment-855</link>
		<dc:creator>sherry</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 19 Apr 2011 20:42:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Wonderful and insightful post! The last 2 tips really hit home for me.

So, back to editing! :-)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Wonderful and insightful post! The last 2 tips really hit home for me.</p>
<p>So, back to editing! :-)</p>
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		<title>By: Sterling Editing &#187; The great all-seeing eye (an exercise)</title>
		<link>http://sterlingediting.com/first-person/comment-page-1/#comment-425</link>
		<dc:creator>Sterling Editing &#187; The great all-seeing eye (an exercise)</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 18 Jan 2010 20:23:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] of view can be a tricky thing. We&#8217;ve talked about the limitations of first-person POV, which isn&#8217;t always as much of an instant path into character as writers sometimes believe. [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] of view can be a tricky thing. We&#8217;ve talked about the limitations of first-person POV, which isn&#8217;t always as much of an instant path into character as writers sometimes believe. [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Nicola Griffith</title>
		<link>http://sterlingediting.com/first-person/comment-page-1/#comment-5</link>
		<dc:creator>Nicola Griffith</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 09 Sep 2009 04:24:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hey, Vicki.  Thanks for the kind words.  We certainly aim to deliver the very best advice and support possible.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey, Vicki.  Thanks for the kind words.  We certainly aim to deliver the very best advice and support possible.</p>
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		<title>By: Vicki</title>
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		<dc:creator>Vicki</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 08 Sep 2009 22:39:14 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Impressive.  Editcast and written narratives - examples of the high caliber guidance these successful writers will deliver.</description>
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