<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?><rss version="2.0"
	xmlns:content="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/content/"
	xmlns:dc="http://purl.org/dc/elements/1.1/"
	xmlns:atom="http://www.w3.org/2005/Atom"
	xmlns:sy="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/syndication/"
		>
<channel>
	<title>Comments on: Beginnings</title>
	<atom:link href="http://sterlingediting.com/beginnings/feed/" rel="self" type="application/rss+xml" />
	<link>http://sterlingediting.com/beginnings/</link>
	<description>Editing, mentoring and coaching for writers</description>
	<lastBuildDate>Sat, 14 Jan 2012 04:18:02 +0000</lastBuildDate>
	<sy:updatePeriod>hourly</sy:updatePeriod>
	<sy:updateFrequency>1</sy:updateFrequency>
	<generator>http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3</generator>
	<item>
		<title>By: David Scully</title>
		<link>http://sterlingediting.com/beginnings/comment-page-1/#comment-27</link>
		<dc:creator>David Scully</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 18 Sep 2009 02:01:08 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid isPermaLink="false">http://www.sterlingediting.com.fqdns.net/?p=682#comment-27</guid>
		<description>The greatest opening ever...

&quot;So gorgeous was the spectacle on the May morning of 1910 when nine kings rode in the funeral of Edward VII of England that the crowd, waiting in hushed and black-clad awe, could not keep back gasps of admiration.  In scarlet and blue and green and purple, three by three the sovereigns rode through the palace gates, with plumed helmets, gold braid, crimson sashes, and jewelled orders flashing in the sun.  After them came five heirs apparent, forty more imperial or royal highnesses, seven queens - four dowagers and three regnant - and a scattering of special ambassadors from uncrowned countries.  Together they represented seventy nations in the greatest assemblage of royalty and rank ever gathered in one place and, of its kind, the last.  The muffled tongue of Big Ben tolled nine by the clock as the cortege left the palace, but on history&#039;s clock it was sunset and the sun of the old world was setting in a dying blaze of splendour never to be seen again.&quot;

If that is not fine writing, then I don&#039;t know what is...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The greatest opening ever&#8230;</p>
<p>&#8220;So gorgeous was the spectacle on the May morning of 1910 when nine kings rode in the funeral of Edward VII of England that the crowd, waiting in hushed and black-clad awe, could not keep back gasps of admiration.  In scarlet and blue and green and purple, three by three the sovereigns rode through the palace gates, with plumed helmets, gold braid, crimson sashes, and jewelled orders flashing in the sun.  After them came five heirs apparent, forty more imperial or royal highnesses, seven queens &#8211; four dowagers and three regnant &#8211; and a scattering of special ambassadors from uncrowned countries.  Together they represented seventy nations in the greatest assemblage of royalty and rank ever gathered in one place and, of its kind, the last.  The muffled tongue of Big Ben tolled nine by the clock as the cortege left the palace, but on history&#8217;s clock it was sunset and the sun of the old world was setting in a dying blaze of splendour never to be seen again.&#8221;</p>
<p>If that is not fine writing, then I don&#8217;t know what is&#8230;</p>
]]></content:encoded>
	</item>
	<item>
		<title>By: Tweets that mention Sterling Editing &#124; Beginnings -- Topsy.com</title>
		<link>http://sterlingediting.com/beginnings/comment-page-1/#comment-26</link>
		<dc:creator>Tweets that mention Sterling Editing &#124; Beginnings -- Topsy.com</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 16 Sep 2009 17:38:00 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid isPermaLink="false">http://www.sterlingediting.com.fqdns.net/?p=682#comment-26</guid>
		<description>[...] This post was mentioned on Twitter by Sterling Editing and Sterling Editing. Sterling Editing said: From Sterling Editing &quot;Beginnings&quot; (stories are like blind dates -- it matters how they begin...) http://bit.ly/zZ5wM [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] This post was mentioned on Twitter by Sterling Editing and Sterling Editing. Sterling Editing said: From Sterling Editing &quot;Beginnings&quot; (stories are like blind dates &#8212; it matters how they begin&#8230;) <a href="http://bit.ly/zZ5wM" rel="nofollow">http://bit.ly/zZ5wM</a> [...]</p>
]]></content:encoded>
	</item>
	<item>
		<title>By: Kelley</title>
		<link>http://sterlingediting.com/beginnings/comment-page-1/#comment-25</link>
		<dc:creator>Kelley</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 16 Sep 2009 17:36:47 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid isPermaLink="false">http://www.sterlingediting.com.fqdns.net/?p=682#comment-25</guid>
		<description>I&#039;m the opposite -- I have to get the opening paragraphs right before I can move ahead, even when I&#039;ve got scenes burning to be written.  It&#039;s one of the things that fascinates me about writing, how many different ways there are to do it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m the opposite &#8212; I have to get the opening paragraphs right before I can move ahead, even when I&#8217;ve got scenes burning to be written.  It&#8217;s one of the things that fascinates me about writing, how many different ways there are to do it.</p>
]]></content:encoded>
	</item>
	<item>
		<title>By: Jaym Gates</title>
		<link>http://sterlingediting.com/beginnings/comment-page-1/#comment-24</link>
		<dc:creator>Jaym Gates</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 16 Sep 2009 17:28:36 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid isPermaLink="false">http://www.sterlingediting.com.fqdns.net/?p=682#comment-24</guid>
		<description>I always write the opening lines last for some reason. 

The examples were quite useful. Being able to see several variations of a lesson makes it easier to draw comparisons.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I always write the opening lines last for some reason. </p>
<p>The examples were quite useful. Being able to see several variations of a lesson makes it easier to draw comparisons.</p>
]]></content:encoded>
	</item>
	<item>
		<title>By: Kelley</title>
		<link>http://sterlingediting.com/beginnings/comment-page-1/#comment-23</link>
		<dc:creator>Kelley</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 16 Sep 2009 15:31:27 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid isPermaLink="false">http://www.sterlingediting.com.fqdns.net/?p=682#comment-23</guid>
		<description>Great!  I&#039;m glad it was helpful.  And timing is everything (grin).</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great!  I&#8217;m glad it was helpful.  And timing is everything (grin).</p>
]]></content:encoded>
	</item>
	<item>
		<title>By: Marc Jacobs</title>
		<link>http://sterlingediting.com/beginnings/comment-page-1/#comment-22</link>
		<dc:creator>Marc Jacobs</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 16 Sep 2009 15:21:55 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid isPermaLink="false">http://www.sterlingediting.com.fqdns.net/?p=682#comment-22</guid>
		<description>Thanks. Your posting came just as I finished a draft of a story. I reopened the file, stared at the opening paragraph, and reworked it. Wonderful timing.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks. Your posting came just as I finished a draft of a story. I reopened the file, stared at the opening paragraph, and reworked it. Wonderful timing.</p>
]]></content:encoded>
	</item>
</channel>
</rss>

